Fathers hit their daughters,
Leaving friends to comfort her.
Brothers knock sisters unconcious,
Leaving friends to make sure she's alright.
Friends cry,
Even those who try not to.
Abused daughters tell people
About their lives,
And others wish to do something.
The suffering continues.
Lives are thrown together.
Horrible things happen to one person,
While the combined life wishes to switch lives,
So the other won't have to suffer.
Why can't everyone have a great life?
©2008 ~XlivingxparadoxX
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This is not part of my 100, it's just a poem I did a while back when I said that I would do a poem every time something emotional happened to either one of my friends.
This is the second one, the first one is The Wall Is Crumbling.
This is the second one, the first one is The Wall Is Crumbling.
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No one has a great life...
Just because:
People are different,not all are good or bad,and they all have different thoughts and plans.
and because
they always want more.
From themselves and others,
Not even noticing if it hurts.
You're right…
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